Just a quick poem I wrote today, still undecided about some lines. I'd love to hear your thoughts.
Have a nice day!
Last night I sprung my room.
Unawares, I kept cleaning
Purifying air raids
The endless assault began.
I choked on dust fortifications,
tripped on yesterday’s socks and lone jumper
The front was disinfected.
blocked paths but I expunged
The challengers sunk in the sink.
In a last ditch attempt,
The room took its hostages
The combat ceased as we clarified the situation
We raked our brains, scoured the sources,
Brushed away the press
Before throwing down the brush
At two am the dust bunny was surrendered
She feinted in a vacuum of defeat
We celebrated with cheers,
“Windex all round!”
Glasses chinked and spilt, crumbs fell to the floor.
In the morning,
Defeat crept up over me