Saturday, September 17, 2011

Ebb

Just trying to start writing again; here's a little piece. I'd really like to hear what you think. Thankyou for reading.

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Ebb

I fell on you
You fell for me
And you were caught by somebody else
as I was caught on you.

3 comments:

Miss Tallulah Porkchop said...

I love it. It's simple, sweet and clever. What are you studying? Professional Writing and Editing?

Sarah said...

Thankyou very much! I'm studying Psychology and English. xo

Colette said...

I like the word game here. It tells simply a story in as few words as possible. Keep it up! Writing is a challenge ;)